January 29, 2023 at 10:32 pm
#42269
namo0804
Participant
Thank you for your help, Lal!
I think the revised sentences is better.
Because the modified context seems to lead the reader’s mind toward nirvana, more.
Previous version may be misleading to the reader, I think.
The appropriate use of bold and bulleted list tool increased readability also!
Thank you again for the correction.